Evaluation Of Pitch Feedback

All the feedback we received from the class, (which was our audience) was very positive. There were some areas within the pitch that could've been improved.

1. It was said that they all could clearly identify the direction in which our film title sequence idea was going. This was because we were confident in explaining our idea as our voices were loud and clear.
2. The whole class engaged whilst we were presenting our presentation because we explained all the information in full detail.
3. We were told from members of the class that our idea was unique and challenged many gender stereotypes, which we were pleased to have been noticed.
4. It was said that one area we needed to develop was the risk assessment because some risks that weren't mentioned. Such as,
5. It was said that our storyboard covered all aspects of our title sequence idea, and that there was lots of detail on the different types of shot we are going to include which as useful in helping them imagine the outcome of our film.
6. Also, another improvement we could've made was input the different types of sounds we are planning to use onto the pitch powerpoint to play for the audience. The soundscape would help the audience better understand the non-diegetic/diegetic sounds we said we are going to include. 
7. Another development that was mentioned was on our idea of including a flashback in our opening title sequence. Originally, we planned to include a flashback as we thought it would make the title sequence even more interesting and make it even more direct to the audience the plot of the film. It was said that the flashback wasn't necessary and would complicate the filming process. So in addition to this compliment we scraped the idea and replaced the scenes with extra scenes, (like extra establishing songs) to stretch out the story it could reach the 2 minute mark.

Overall, I think the feedback we received was good and that our pitch was a success. We were very organised and elaborate on our ideas for our film title sequence, in which we gave extra detail to our audience.