Evaluation of pitch feedback

Doing pitches was successful as we were able to gain new ideas and learn from other groups about different shots or how to plan our better.

Our pitch was a success as people liked our plot idea and how it went well with the thriller genre. We were able to make our pitch visually appealing as well as professional which most people liked. It was also successful as it was very detailed and mostly clear about our ideas for example our audience profiling was very detailed. Our storyboard had a lot of information e.g. shot types, what each shot is trying to show and which title credits will be shown in each shot.

From pitching our ideas, we were able to gain new ways to improve our film to make it better. For example, being clear in our sequence and focussing on the main character instead of having so many flashbacks. This is because it will reveal too much in just the title sequence so we will improve it to maintain the tension and suspense by building it up gradually. Another way to improve our ideas is by having a soundscape to be clear on the sounds that will be used. In our pitch, we need to expand on how our film goes against stereotypes which it does as our main character is a female whereas typically in thriller films, the main character is a male. We also need to edit our production schedule as there are some days we have changed and also edit our risk assessment.