evaluation of pitch feedback

things we did well:

- very detailed pitch
- we included the shot types in our storyboard
-our plot was really creative and clear

things we need to improve:

- risk assessment
-  sound scape
- story board
-  the amount of characters we use in our title sequence
- make the main characters and the other characters role
- production schedule
-  the amount of flashbacks we have included

how are we going to improve?

- add solutions to our risk assesment
- add more shots to our story board
- add a sound scape that suits the genre of our film
- we are only going to show the main character through out the title sequnece
- we are not going to use too many flashbacks in our title sequence